I Always Win!

Tyler and Ryan compete a big race. So, they thought that the winner of this race was me. 
Ryan's father gave a new bike to him. He wanted him to win the race.
During the race, Tyler was faster than Ryan. But, when they were about to goal, Ryan pushed Tyler off. Because of that, he injured his a leg. Ryan told the truth to his father. So, they went to hospital and apologized him.

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  1. Tyler and Ryan compete a big race.
    Tyler and Ryan compete in a big race.

    So, they thought that the winner of this race was me.
    ? ? How is this story connected to you?

    Also, please avoid using commas after "And", "But", or "So".

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  2. It's already a month since your last book review. Please find some time to write regularly.

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